The Rancher’s Wedding Betrayal by Marian Tee
by Marian Tee
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He asked me to marry him.
Then destroyed me before we ever said “I do.”
Just-turned thirty, just-fired, and just-homeless Evelline Ramirez is officially out of options.
Her only way forward? A fake engagement with the man who once accused her of ruining everything.
Billionaire rancher Hunter Ferguson’s offer is simple: No love. No trust. Just a deal.
But the moment he learns she’s still untouched…
All his rules go up in smoke.
He touches her like she’s everything.
Then pushes her away like she’s nothing.
And drives Eve to her knees with one act of betrayal.
Now the girl who swore she’d never beg…has become the woman who whispers, “Please.”
But some betrayals don’t come with second chances.
- File Name:the-ranchers-wedding-betrayal-by-marian-tee.epub
- Original Title:The Rancher's Wedding Betrayal
- Creator:Marian Tee
- Language:en
- Identifier:MOBI-ASIN:B0FFTRK55B
- Publisher:Marian Pinera
- Date:2025-06-26T00:00:00+00:00
- File Size:125.656 KB
Table of Content
- 1. He asked me to marry him. | Then destroyed me before we ever said "I do."
- 2. The Rancher's Wedding Betrayal
- 3. Chapter One
- 4. Chapter Two
- 5. Chapter Three
- 6. Chapter Four
- 7. Chapter Five
- 8. Chapter Six
- 9. Chapter Seven
- 10. Chapter Eight
- 11. Chapter Nine
- 12. Chapter Ten
- 13. Chapter Eleven
- 14. Epilogue
Marian Tee
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The Rancher's Wedding Betrayal, part of the Billionaires of Evergreen, Texas series, was about 30-year-old Evelline "Eve" Ramirez and 38-year-old Hunter Ferguson, a billionaire rancher (and her former stepbrother).
Side Note: There was a bit of confusion regarding the timeline of the story. The author had the FMC mention in an internal monologue that she had been 19 when she first met the MMC, who had been 25 at the time. (It was later stated that she had been 19 and HE had been 27 when they first met...NOT 25. None of the timelines made any sense at this point.) It had been 8 years since she had last seen him, which meant that their ages SHOULD have been: FMC 27 and the MMC 33. However, upon seeing him again for the first time, the FMC had just turned 30, and she said to herself that he was 38. That meant it had been 11 years since she left the ranch. So, if the reader were to get the timeline correct, then it would be that the FMC had lived in the MMC's home for 3 years before the incident occurred that forced her from the place. )
After losing her job and her home, she had no other recourse but to ask her former stepbrother for help. However, eight years had passed since Eve had last seen him, and things hadn't ended well between them. He had accused her of something that hadn't been her fault, but she had been going through a rebellious stage and refused to tell him it wasn't her.
The book flipped POVs from one paragraph to the next, even though the chapters would begin in one person's POV. Even a third party's POV was given at one point, and it was never revisited. The inconsistencies in the storyline were irritating and disruptive.
Unfortunately, the author wasted precious words and pages on flashbacks that honestly weren't all that necessary. Just a few statements between the two main characters would have sufficed in bringing the needed information to the reader's attention.
This book was full of angst, drama, OTT jealousy, OTT possessiveness, and misunderstandings. The emotional rollercoaster was in full swing with all of its usual twists, turns, and loop-da-loops from start to finish. The push/pull was mindblowing, and the plot twists appeared to be never-ending.
The book must have been written at an alarmingly fast pace because the grammatical errors were plentiful...and distracted from the flow of the story (one such error was unforgivable, and that's when the author misspelled God with Hod). The book had so many holes in the plot, the storyline, and the continuity that it made reading difficult.
While the main characters seemed to be well-developed, the maturity level of both was sorely lacking. A 30-year-old woman who still felt drawn to rebellion instead of honesty, and a 38-year-old man who still jumped to conclusions and allowed himself to be led around by his...err...emotions and manipulated by other people, were all hard to swallow.
I only gave this a two-star rating because it needed a lot more tweaking, as well as a little more time for development and growth.
1/10 really bad