i dont care how evil the dad is, dont do that crap in front of him
That whole love at first sight thing is cool or whatever, but some of the dialogue was very cringey and i feel like they moved frighteningly fast.
Please add more books of her and this series!!!! looooooved the book:)
I understand you have to suspend disbelief and kinda accept some ridiculousness, but this is incredibly far fetched. Its so unlikely that it takes you right out of the story. The romance feels very paint by numbers forced.
Lovely story.... I liked it. Couldn't put the book away just to know how it would go at the end with David and Goliath, hahahaha.