Tarak’s Torment by Crystal Rose
Gabby
Should I be thankful about crash-landing on an alien planet? Probably not, but when the alternative was being abducted and sold as a slave, I’ll take my chances with the deadly plants and monstrous beasts on Valo Prime. Especially when I’m saved from a giant boar by a big, sexy alien who takes me to his home and offers me his protection. Now all I have to do is convince him to go back for the other women who were kidnapped with me, and hope we can make it back without being eaten alive.
Tarak
I’ve known my entire life I would never be worthy of taking a mate. As an outcast, I had resigned myself to an existence of struggle and loneliness, until a strange being from the stars stops my entire world with a simple smile. What if the elders were wrong? What if this smart, beautiful female is meant to be mine? She is the answer to my every prayer, and keeping her safe and happy is my life’s new purpose. But she wants to return into the dangerous wilderness of Valo Prime to save the others like her.
Can my hunters and I keep her and the other females safe as we travel through the predator filled woods? Will I be able to live with myself if she gets hurt or worse?
- File Name:taraks-torment-by-crystal-rose.epub
- Original Title:Tarak's Torment: Shifters of Valo Prime Book 1
- Creator:Crystal Rose
- Language:en
- Identifier:MOBI-ASIN:B0CQHS4J6D
- Date:2024-02-14T00:00:00+00:00
- File Size:7.036 MB
Table of Content
- 1. Chapter 1
- 2. Chapter 2
- 3. Chapter 3
- 4. Chapter 4
- 5. Chapter 5
- 6. Chapter 6
- 7. Chapter 7
- 8. Chapter 8
- 9. Chapter 9
- 10. Chapter 10
- 11. Chapter 11
- 12. Chapter 12
- 13. Chapter 13
- 14. Chapter 14
- 15. Chapter 15
- 16. Chapter 16
- 17. Chapter 17
- 18. Chapter 18
- 19. Chapter 19
- 20. Chapter 20
- 21. Epilogue
It's a no for me. I didn't make it half way. Overdone plot(kidnapped, crash landed, saved by primitives). Pretty simplistic writing and a few errors. The characters and dialog is pretty cringy too. Comes across as more of a fanfiction that was inspired by Ice Planet Barbarians by Ruby Dixon with an anime twist.
FYI, a tanuki isn't a racoon at all, despite the name "racoon dog". It's closest relative is the fox.
It's the start of a new series so I always give a little leeway. Could be an interesting series, shades of Ruby Dixon and Ella Maven.