Off Limits by J.L. Beck
Kase Jones is my best friend’s dad, and nearly twice my age, but he makes my blood hum, and my body ache like no one ever has before, and there’s no denying I want him…
Maddie Sullivan is my daughter’s best friend and she knows just how to tempt the man hidden beneath the suit. She makes me want to break all the rules, and the biggest one being… sleeping with her.
When my daughter goes abroad for the summer to explore Europe all the rules I’ve spent years keeping in place get broken with one single kiss. One taste and I’m trapped, the need to consume her taking hold of me.
We both know that when Jessica comes home we can’t be together, that is until Maddie finds out she’s pregnant. The need to be the man she deserves takes hold and leaves me wondering how with a baby on the way, and a love affair growing between us how long we can hide our secrets from her?
- File Name:off-limits-by-j-l-beck.epub
- Original Title:Off Limits (My Best Friends Dad Romance)
- Creator:J.L. Beck
- Language:en
- Identifier:MOBI-ASIN:B06XH171C2
- Date:2017-03-06T18:30:00+00:00
- File Size:136.116 KB
My Best Friend's Dad was about 19-year-old Maddie and 44-year-old Kase Jones, her best friend's father. Maddie had been in love with Kase since she was sixteen but had never acted on her feelings because she didn't want to hurt her best friend. Kase had apparently shared her feelings, though he never told her or acted on them either for the same reason. However, when Maddie and his daughter Jessica were 19, Jessica was going overseas on vacation. She had been working for her dad at his law office for some time, so she was going to train Maddie to take her place. Maddie wanted to work for Kase before deciding whether or not she wanted to go to law school. She thought working for him would give her a better idea as to if studying law was the right fit for her. Kase wasn't certain she should work in his office because he didn't know if he could resist her, but he hired her anyway. Things heated up almost the instant Kase's daughter left the office. It started with a spanking then, after Jess left for her trip, things went off like a rocket and never stopped. There was only a small bit of drama, even less angst, and only a tiny bit of push/pull between the two main characters. Even the fallout with Jessica was brief, leaving Kase and Maddie with an HFN ending. There were many unresolved issues that left the reader wondering what happened in certain areas. There had been a brief scuffle that never got resolved. There was the thought that Maddie would attend a law school that never got mentioned again. It was things like that which irritated the crap out of me. I don't like loose ends in a story. It was challenging to get through this short book because the grammatical errors were off the charts straight out of the starting gate. Almost from the first sentence to the very last one, it was obvious that the author had not done much (if any) editing and/or proofreading. The punctuation was almost non-existent, and the sentence structures were badly written. There were as many missing words as missing punctuation marks, which made for a frustrating time. She also used the wrong word in certain places that were obviously incorrect (i.e. taunt instead of taut). The author also used a ton of slang words (Dude, etc) that were just a bit annoying and detracted from the intelligence of the FMC. It made her sound like a surfer rather than a potential law student. Although it had potential, the whole thing was a bit disappointing and left a bad taste in my mouth, and it wasn't because of the relationship between the two MCs. It had everything to do with the mistakes made in writing the book. I couldn't give it more than a one-star rating.
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